Greenfrost6's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[madness combat 0]

Good for a first try.

Your movie wasn't the greatest, but not back for a first attempt. Here's a few steps you can take to improve on your future work:

1. Before submitting a movie, try making an icon. Movies without icons usually get lower scores.
2. We all like Madness, however the idea is getting pretty stale and should really be left to it's original creator: Krinkels. Try making up your own ideas.
3. Hank can't talk. Sorry :P
4. The animation was quite choppy. Try spending more time on movement and place a few more frames in between character movement.
5. Add sound. Adding sound into a movie can change the score dramatically.

Overall it wasn't the greatest piece of work I've ever set my eyes on, however you've done an ok job for a first submission.

2/5
4/10

Yellowmadness54 responds:

there was sound actually but my computer said "sound will be ignored"

[Super Mario Bros Z ep.149]

I like watching SMBZ but..

I have to say this made my day. Really funny stuff, the overall art could have been better, but pretty good none the less. Maybe make it slightly longer next time, that may get people's attention.

[NG: The Zoo]

I remember this.

About time you got this together. :P
I remember when I was still a newb with art and I attempted to submit an entry. I don't blame you for not using mine, it was crap anyway. XP Great artwork, creative concept, voted 5.

[4 Funny Shorts]

Not bad.

Ok, first.
- No sound? Sorry, but that will drastically lower your score.
- Try putting in a preloader.

However, your animation style is excellent, and it's nice and smooth. Keep trying with your flash work.

5/10
Voted 2

CYCLOKAT responds:

sorry i just started using flash

[How to steal a flash-TUT]

Hahaha!

That's excellent! Very orginal. I second AutoTank's review. Nice job

[The Kisame Machine]

Sorry.

But try a little harder next time, work more on your flash. If you have a problem with sound try the flash forums for help.

[Deaths in Military]

Hmm..

Ok first off the Flash size was a little out of whack. Second it was a little short. And thirdly it was kinda more like an advertisment rather than a movie. Anywho I guess you had very little time to come up with this so nice job anyhow. Voted 2.

[Idiot Heroes DEMO]

Sorry...

..but demo's arn't really appreciated here on NGs. Finish your movie, then try again. Also work on your sound syncing.

[Legend of Miyamoto]

Awsome

Great flash. You tied the artwork and the sprites together nicely. And the music was perfectly fitted the situation. Very nice.

A+

[That Damn Goomba!]

Good

A nice quick sprite movie, nice file size as well.
The New Super Mario Bros 8 Bit sprite was made by Gorsal. Credit him next time ;)